Uxía, I love the idea of this comic, but... In the first frame, you wrote "She comes to London", and it has to be "she came", because she has done it. You should write "she's going to". You only have one mistake more, you should write "she became an important model", in spite of "she was". Good job, you don't have too much mistakes, and you wrote a lot. Congratulations!
Uxía, I love the idea of this comic, but... In the first frame, you wrote "She comes to London", and it has to be "she came", because she has done it. You should write "she's going to". You only have one mistake more, you should write "she became an important model", in spite of "she was". Good job, you don't have too much mistakes, and you wrote a lot. Congratulations!
ResponderEliminarHello uxiii! You did a good job but it´s very simple and I can´t see any mistakes, but you have a good idea and it´s very realistic. IHF3ºESOC
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