martes, 31 de marzo de 2015

bulling por Ireneeee

2 comentarios:

  1. Hello Irene. I think the idea of your comic is great, but I'm going to try to correct some mistakes you have. For example, in the last frame, you wrote the question "Do you read it?" in present simple, and the question has to be in present perfect because the boy hasn't read it but he can still do it. Congratulations, it's a good job in general!

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  2. Oh! I forgot correcting a word! In the fifth frame, you wrote "doughter" in spite of "daughter".

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