It's a good job Alicia, but you have got a grammatical error, you put "Whath's the problem girls" and the correct form is "What's", and also after points you must put capitals letters. But the rest of job it's good. UCV 3ºA
The idea is great but your way of writting is not easy to understand because you forgot the capital letters, the points (.) and the commas (,) . Moreover you have got a misake: "Whath's". Improve the grammatical mistakes. But I liked the history! Well done Alicia. RCI 3ºA
Hello Alicia. The idea is great but you have some mistakes for example: "wath´s" is not correct, the correct word is "whath´s" an "gils" is not correct, you have to put "girl". Moreover you should use commas and dots because sometimes is difficult to understand. The idea is great and if you correct the mistakes it can be beautiful. MMC 3ºA
This is a good job Alicia FMC 3C
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ResponderEliminarA STRUCTURE VERY GOOD. GOOD JOB! RTV 3ºB
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ResponderEliminarIt´s a good job .Because is very realistic
ResponderEliminarIt´s a good job .Because is very realistic
ResponderEliminarwell done it´s a good job. It´s very realistic AGS 3ºB
ResponderEliminarI like it. It represents like is the socity.
ResponderEliminarI like it. It represents like is the socity.
ResponderEliminarwell done it´s a good job. It´s very realistic AGS 3ºB
ResponderEliminarIt´s good. I like it I think Ana is very very bad. She have to calm and don´t meddle in things what she isn´t incumbent upon. LRM 3ºA
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ResponderEliminarI like it.The story is clear and easy to follow and reflects perfectly the concept of bullyng.Good job .IBG 3ºB
ResponderEliminarI like it.The story is clear and easy to follow and reflects perfectly the concept of bullyng.Good job .IBG 3ºB
ResponderEliminarI like it.It`s very realistic but a sad history...
ResponderEliminarYou use few shots and poits of view, but very good job.
LGB 3ºB
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ResponderEliminarIt's a good job Alicia, but you have got a grammatical error, you put "Whath's the problem girls" and the correct form is "What's", and also after points you must put capitals letters. But the rest of job it's good. UCV 3ºA
ResponderEliminarThe idea is great but your way of writting is not easy to understand because you forgot the capital letters, the points (.) and the commas (,) . Moreover you have got a misake: "Whath's". Improve the grammatical mistakes. But I liked the history! Well done Alicia. RCI 3ºA
ResponderEliminarI like your comic, but you must improve your English because you have a lot of grammatical errors. IVC 3ºA
ResponderEliminarIt´s good, but you could make the comic longer. DFS 3A
ResponderEliminarHello Alicia. The idea is great but you have some mistakes for example: "wath´s" is not correct, the correct word is "whath´s" an "gils" is not correct, you have to put "girl".
ResponderEliminarMoreover you should use commas and dots because sometimes is difficult to understand.
The idea is great and if you correct the mistakes it can be beautiful.
MMC 3ºA
You have some mistakes but the rest is nice! Good job.
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You have some mistakes but the rest is nice! Good job.
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I like it! It's a good job but you have got some mistakes,the idea is great.It's very realistic.
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