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The idea for the comic was good but you can ordenated the ballons and separated it because its a very difficult to understand. SSU 3ºB
I don't know where I can start reading from! The balloons are messy! You must take into account the order of the balloons: from the top to the bottom, and from left to right RTV 3ºB
Well done, but the order of the balloons is difficult to understand. It is really confusing.
You don´t follow the comic´s language, from the top to the bottom and from the left to the right.IBG 3ºB
Is good but thebullets are close together and it is difficult to understand.3B AGC
Well done, but the order of the balloons is difficult to understand. It is really confusing. DFS 3A
The argument is fine, but you can place the balloons to understand the story. NRM 3ºC
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ResponderEliminarThe idea for the comic was good but you can ordenated the ballons and separated it because its a very difficult to understand. SSU 3ºB
ResponderEliminarI don't know where I can start reading from! The balloons are messy! You must take into account the order of the balloons: from the top to the bottom, and from left to right RTV 3ºB
ResponderEliminarWell done, but the order of the balloons is difficult to understand. It is really confusing.
ResponderEliminarYou don´t follow the comic´s language, from the top to the bottom and from the left to the right.IBG 3ºB
ResponderEliminarIs good but thebullets are close together and it is difficult to understand.
ResponderEliminar3B AGC
Well done, but the order of the balloons is difficult to understand. It is really confusing. DFS 3A
ResponderEliminarThe argument is fine, but you can place the balloons to understand the story. NRM 3ºC
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