Well done, Lara, I like your comic, but you have little mistakes. For example, in the third frame, in spite of "What's it this?", you should write "What's this?" or "What's it?", and in the nineth frame, you should write "I want to tell YOU something". Could you explain the ending to me, please? Are they moving? It's a good job.
very nice, a good job
ResponderEliminarThe idea is very good and original. Well done. PSD 3ºB
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ResponderEliminarThe comic is very good,but hasn´t got dialogue.AGC 3ºB
ResponderEliminarThe comic is very good,but hasn´t got dialogue.AGC 3ºB
ResponderEliminarIt is good, but you should add another introduction because ``It is in the air´´ :) DFS 3A
ResponderEliminarWell done, Lara, I like your comic, but you have little mistakes. For example, in the third frame, in spite of "What's it this?", you should write "What's this?" or "What's it?", and in the nineth frame, you should write "I want to tell YOU something". Could you explain the ending to me, please? Are they moving?
ResponderEliminarIt's a good job.
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ResponderEliminarI like the comic.There isn´t a lot of text and I enjoy the images. May be you should put something more in the begining.
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I like the comic.There isn´t a lot of text and I enjoy the images. May be you should put something more in the begining.
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I like the comic.There isn´t a lot of text and I enjoy the images. May be you should put something more in the begining.
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ResponderEliminarI like the comic.There isn´t a lot of text and I enjoy the images. May be you should put something morein the begining.
ResponderEliminarWELL DONE,I LIKE THE IMAGES , AND I CAN UNDERSTAND YOUR JOB. CONGRATULATIONS
ResponderEliminarI LIKE IT!!!
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I like it! But... where is the text? There are a shorts balloons and there arent't a lot of dialogue. Your english is not bad! Very good Lara! RTV3B
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